Irish Papist

Irish Papist
Me and General Robert Lee

Sunday, March 12, 2017

Regarding my Snow Globe Poem

My office mate (very kindly) read and commented on the snow globe poem that I posted a little while ago. He liked it and made some interesting comments, but I was surprised that the main themes of the poem eluded him. He's a very well-read and literate guy. Maybe I just didn't express them well enough.

I was quite pleased with it, since in both themes and imagery I'd felt I'd put a lot of the things that fascinate me the most into a short poem.

If anyone else feels like casting an eye over it, and telling me what they think its themes are, please do. You can read it here. As I say, it's short. Feel free to suggest improvements!

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